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ADoSD Prologue pg 2

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finally done page two... I would like to note that because these are fully coloured, and not black and white, they take a long while and of course I work, cook, and have a life on the side, so I hope to update at least once a week, or twice if not too many items in a picture(such as this one... which required many items to be sitting around...) hopefully next page will not take too long to do. or will be posted monday or tuesday next week.

what I know is this: background is better then last time(yay!) however text is still... well... an issue of getting on here. as was I was hoping to make speech bubbles have an outline around it but on photoshop its hard to find this option so I had to give up on this. this writing is also only for Luna, cause of the way she speaks is fancy :P everyone else will have well a better writing text that I found afterwords. :3

list of do not enter dreams: I made this up to bring up something that was mention in the fanfiction that the ambassidor from Arabia did not appreciate dream walking.... hopefully it will be brought up later... maybe? :P ALSO TIBBLES!!! though isn't mentioned in the fanfiction, I couldn't help putting luna's pet oppossum in to make luna explain the situation. some reason I didn't like the whole 'lets sum it up in a text box' 

anyway more magic and sparkles and stuff, and finally explaining and getting somewhere!

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characters belongs to hasbro
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Very nice, I'm enjoying the liberties you took on this one, such as taking a more comedic approach with the dream list and adding Luna's pet, which I didn't have in the fic. The background improved a bit but I would say the biggest criticism I have is that it doesn't look like a room in which a princess sleeps, more like any normal person's.

I think the way you handled exposition is my favorite part of the piece. You did manage to convey a lot of information simply through visuals. Obviously I'm biased, but I think it does the job of getting the reader curious.